Voidious: Day Twelve

Well, I'm about to start writing a bit more, but I figured I should post what I have. About 40% of the way to 50k, and I'm pacing for 50k, so it should be about 40% of the story, too.

The diary form is interesting, and I don't think I'll be writing another diary-based story for a while; but I've had the idea for this story for over a year, so I'm glad that I'm getting it done. It's tough to try and write it in an appealing style while keeping it distinct from my own writing style.

Anyway, here it is: To A Trained Eye draft v0.13
Word Count: 19,900

As always, comments/suggestions welcome.