Voidious: Day Four, Part II

Got a bit more done, and brought myself a few hundred words over "50k pace" for 4 days.

Here it is: To A Trained Eye... Draft v0.04

Word count: 7,061.

I'd definitely appreciate any comments/suggestions on my work so far... I'm pretty pleased with it, but I've never written a diary-style story, so I'd greatly appreciate any criticisms.

Enjoy.